Sand Storm Comments

you have created a vivid word picture, imagery- and i am reminded of the dust storms i saw when i was growing up in Chandigarh. what about the storm raging within all of us which need an outlet and vent. lovely Raj

Beautifully written about the sandstorm with apt similes.

Amazing composition, a beautiful work.

This sand storm, breathtaking, I was wondering where this phenomenon....... and it all ended on that great earthy trance curious write, liked reading it 10