Satiety Comments

At an advanced age one has a lot of thoughts billowing like smoke from within, and often equally smoke-screened. This poem reflects this with beautiful play of rhyming words juxtaposed to enhance their effect. Yes, satiety is felt at this age. Marvelous piece.

A sublime piece of work dear madam! ..God is fair, unfair/Enough, enough/Yet just one wish/Just enough to retire eternal/Only in fair God. Thank you so much for your lovely remarks on my poet page and poems too. Due to some technical problems I am not able to reply..Pray God fetch you peace and happiness always!