[save The Lies] Poem by Frozen Beauty

[save The Lies]

Rating: 5.0


can you see it in her eyes
does it take you
by surprise
did you find
your deeper connection
when she looked
in your
direction
did you skip a step
or miss a beat
have you lost your breath
in her fumbling
with her keys
or the mumbling
as she leaves
do you understand
have you ever hoped
she were at your side
when you wake
in the night
do you feel alone
is she on your mind
could this ever make you feel alive

(12/18/08)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow great poem.. I love the ending you summed it right up wondefully.. Krista

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LOVEFOOL Aka 31 January 2009

Good write flows really well10+

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