fall with me into the waves
flooding from within
melancholy oversight
seeping through my skin
breathe deep
the moment is coming
our hearts are water
the sky is an ocean
clouds start bleeding to the earth
[the tides begin to change]
souls left withered and rehearsed
[the lies remain the same]
sink with me into the sky
overwhelmed with sin
shrouded immorality
compelled to give in
breathe deep
the moment is coming
our hearts are water
the sky is an ocean
clouds start bleeding to the earth
[the tides begin to change]
souls left withered and rehearsed
[the lies remain the same]
breathe deep
the moment is coming
rehearse the lies
the water, the motion
fall into the sky
my heart, the ocean
wait for the tide
withered and broken
the clouds bleed for change
(09/09/08)
This is an excellent piece, , , , , somehow, , , , the music to 'Nights in White Satin' played through my mind while reading this. Amanda, your poetry excelle's with every read of yours that I have the pleasure of reading. Again, excellent work my friend. I am at a sight that I think you would enjoy alot, its (PoetryCastle.org) I am using the same ID, , , Poison9901. If you are by chance looking for a new sight where you may get more recognition, then please by all means come visit us, and if you decide to join, please put me down as reffering you to our sight. I hope to see you there, and if you decide not to join, please by all means, keep sending me the e-mails, you are a growing poet whom I enjoy reading. Take care my friend, and thanks for the excellent read 'Keep on inking the Pages' ~~~Poison~~~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is wonderfully creative. I find nothing here but the loveliness of prose poetry. GW62