you trigger strange emotion
i can't seem to express-
you're so unaware
of the power you posess.
the sound of your voice
sends chills down my spine-
the touch of your hand
steals thoughts from my mind.
uncertain of the reason
i want to hold you tight-
content with the belief
i'll dream of you tonight.
(01/06/08)
This is a piece that speaks very well to anyone who reads it; you should use this 4 one that you feel such 4 aside from having it here....It does not have to be anytime soon. Just hold it to BEING USED for a 'love letter.'
You have an out of the ordinary way of expressing a most common thought. I like that in a writer.
Very sweet and intoxicating, a good size but I wouldn't have argued if the poem went on for another verse or two, it was a good subject to write on and would love to see more poems on this but from different angles, you know to mix things up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, but as you know, I have'nt been here lately. This write of your Amanda is beautiful, so full of emotions and love. Your pen translates your thoughts well to paper. You have a true winner here. This new write of yours is awesome. And I do mean, 'AWESOME'. This is one of those poem's that you read, and wished that you had wrote it instead. You have done a superb job here my friend Amanda. 'Keep on inking the Pages' ~~~Poison~~~