a profound recognition
[of flaws to be adored]
a lasting intimate connection
[never to be bored]
a breath-taking brush
[of a hand that you hold]
a desireable counter-point
[between two beautiful souls]
A lovely composition on love in a lovely form, love it.
the style of using [] is cool. As if u r telling me what -you think- the sentence means to you. Is that what u were doing it for? we both know that no matter what it means to the writter, it will more times than not, mean something different to the readers. INTERPRETATION is something that be told, it's wrong or incorrect in poetry. I believe that's why love writting in forms that let me FEEL the FREEDOM of such!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Paradox in love is beautifully defined in this short poem.