Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Saying Goodbye? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Damp in both eyes
Hesitant in breath
Heavy in heart
Blank in thought
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 31 July 2007

Nothing but a wonderful ending in this captivating poem....No goodbye's here. You and she are but 'one.' How fortunate and wonderful to be blessed with love so true.. a not so sure beginning, but ah, a magnificent ending....you express yourself very well in here....need to go back to 'mi bed.........nite, nite now....xo marci.........

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Ernestine Northover 25 July 2007

What a delight to read. I was beginning to feel quite down until the end dissolved all that! Lovely piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Aasiq the poet 25 July 2007

absolutely wonderful 10 from me.

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