Star Shine


Saying Goodbye - Poem by Star Shine

Crying eyes, broken heart, depression that will never stop.
Saddened face, puffy eyes, thinking about all these lies.
Breathing out one last time, wishing I could say goodbye.
To these whom I love should never part because they mean alot to me, deep in my heart.

Topic(s) of this poem: dark, goodbye

Form: Dramatic Monologue


Comments about Saying Goodbye by Star Shine

  • E.j. Langley (12/5/2015 8:39:00 PM)


    I can almost hear the sobs and see tears on the page. Emotionally charged. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (12/5/2015 7:53:00 PM)


    But new hellos can be wonderful. Thanks, Star (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2015 6:33:00 PM)


    It is always very difficult to say good bye to one's loved ones. A very short and sweet lovely write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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