I never thought a guy could hurt me,
The way this one did
He beat me, he bruised me,
And cut me into pieces
I am forever scarred
And he doesn't care,
I would go to the hospital
But they can do nothing for me
For i am a broken heart
And only my true love can save me
3mo, , , After reading several of your poems, I decided to leave my comment here. You write very well and so far all that I have read comes straight from your heart, That is a good thing. You are still young and have the potential to become a great writer. You see and describe things to others so that they may in turn see thru your eyes, and thats a good thing. Your poetry is heart felt, and no 10 could ever justifiy poetry that has been written thru pain, and sorrow. So I will not degrade your writings by placeing a lower mark on them than they actually deserve. There for just know that I Give you a 100 as it should be. Thanks for shareing your work. and please, , , , 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Men can be jerks at the best of times... Keep searching and you'll find the one for you. Good luck with the poetry and finding a desent guy (it's nearly impossible.) Keep writing.