Saturday, April 11, 2020

Scenes Of Nature Comments

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The route of my early dawn's walk
Stays same as is the hour of clock,
But I see varied shades of scenes,
Be it the sun, river, or greens.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 14 April 2020

The man-made crests of fame may fall, The nature-made whilst still stand tall! The concluding lines are the crux of the poem! Beautiful narration of the scintillating loveliness of Nature....! A 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 April 2020

Thanks for visiting and appreciating the poem. The loveliness of nature as you said remains because the nature always evolves and recreates, whilst the man-made things can only deteriorate with time.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2020

The day of fog and height allows us to memories back the day of dawn's walk. The scene has ever stayed with and perception of dawn's beauty speaks everything. A nice imagery is painted. This poem is very beautifully penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Thanks dear poet for sharing the secrets of my morning walk.

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