Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Schroedinger's Cat Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t know what gives matter mass
or what’s the cause of gravity.
On quarks and leptons I must pass,
a mystery, like McCavity,
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gershon hepner
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Cia Frizzell 02 May 2007

i read this to my cat (whose name is schroedinger, of course) ... it may or may not have approved...

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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007

Great from start to finish! Honest and powerful, especially toward the end. Great use of language and memorable! Top marks and I'll put this one in my favorite poems! -Michael

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gone gone 02 May 2007

Gershon Delightful poem...thanks! ! Love, D.

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