Monday, August 21, 2017

Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

To have lost even the why or the what for -
to dream and to wake with the weight
of even the mechanical why even the mechanical wherefore -
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Joan Metelerkamp
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

like a chorus dissolving not only sadness, sea, but past sadness past past sadness your changing sand and rock shelf, sea, lost generations A lovely mastered art by the poetess, done so elegantly, soaked with carefully chosen imageries and charming metaphors..forces any reader to regard you as a poet of distinction. Thanks dear poetess for the nicely crafted poem. 10+++ for it. Regards. Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary. It is a beautiful metaphorical poem with stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Bill Cantrell 21 August 2017

A wonderful poem, the enchantment, the sea is sweeping clean her dunes and polishing her corals and she knows very well how to affect our emotions! I really love the sea...ocean, and I loved reading your poem.

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