Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Sea-Senryu Comments

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Crumpled, the sea
Folded unto herself
Her cheek, salty!
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indira babbellapati
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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 June 2013

The varying moods of the sea are well portrayed in your Senryus, Indira!

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Shahzia Batool 04 June 2013

Placid as a woman in house-chores, ferocious as a woman in rage, rebellious as a woman in revolt- -this your moody sea!

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visakhapatnam, india
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