Second Childhood Ii Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Second Childhood Ii

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One more youth, nor tooth,
Nor second chance in life's dance,
Just second childhood,
An old man in a child's mood,
An innocent bliss!
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Senryu | 07.06.18 |

Friday, January 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2019

child's mood and bliss innocent.. no teeth........ i smiled at your composition dear Aniruddha....... thank u for your cogitations.......... nice poem. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 January 2019

Thank you Dr Antony, if you have liked this ditty, I think you should read the other piece, Second Childhood, a sonnet I had written in 2008 on a serious note.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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