Secret Around Poem by Robert Rhyme

Secret Around

Rating: 4.8


I look up, I look down
So vast, limitless univese
I am failed to count,

I look right, I look left
I take some turns all around
I guess all are secret.

Secret Around
Saturday, October 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: secret,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trailakya Roy 08 October 2016

I wonder how could you express a vast idea in a few words

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Robert Rhyme 24 October 2016

Thank you dear poet

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Chinedu Dike 08 October 2016

Profound piece of poetry depicting the enigmatic vast phenomenon - The Universe, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Beautiful poem elegantly brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing John. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Robert Rhyme 24 October 2016

wonderful comments, thanks dear Dike

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Robert Rhyme 10 October 2016

Thank you dear friends for your wise and beautiful comments

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Muzahidul Reza 22 February 2019

Yes, secret is all around us, scientific saying, thank you

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Binq Hov 10 December 2018

Great philosophy dear poet

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Muzahidul Reza 27 October 2018

I look right, I look left I take some turns all around I guess all are secret. ...... wisely penned, loved,10

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Muzahidul Reza 27 October 2018

I look up, I look down So vast, limitless univese I am failed to count, ...... a great introspection, thanks for sharing,10

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Muzahidul Reza 27 October 2018

It is a great poem, Mr. Robert Thanks for sharing,10

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