Thursday, July 21, 2011

See The Little Kittens Comments

Rating: 5.0

See the little kittens, prancing all around,
The fur on their backs standing up.
Then running each other into the ground,
They never tire, they never stop.
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Juan Olivarez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of attraction. Wonderful vivid images. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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