Seeing Mum Again Poem by Ian Bowen

Seeing Mum Again



I was the only one
to have alighted from
the punctual 11.16;
in fact,
I believe I was the only passenger
on the half-hour journey
to Elysian Fields.

The deserted platform railings
were dripping with the pink
of wild sweet peas.
The temperature perfect,
and through the shroud
of shimmering heat, I saw you waiting,
gently waving, dressed
in a robe of brilliant white.

I remembered your warmth
as we hugged and kissed,
recalled our hand in hand walks
to the village school and home.
Before you caught the 10.46…

and never came back again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayz LFlynn 11 February 2010

I liked this poem, altho it made me feel sad reading it but you did a good job in describing and seting the scene. Thank you for sharing.

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