Seeing The Desert (Tanka) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Seeing The Desert (Tanka)

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"Seeing this desert
feeling the sadness around
and with the hot winds
blowing through my eyes and skin
it's giving more grief and pain."

Saturday, June 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Reflection of sadness is amazingly perceived from desert. This Tanka is very thought provoking basing on lifestyle there. Pain or grief this brings tear in eyes and we feel sorrow. Amazing sharing is done here...10

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Jesus Llorico 24 June 2018

Thank you for a very nice comment Mr Mahakul.

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