Kate Breeze

Rookie (1983-2022 (how tragic?) / Not here, but over there.)

Self-Portrait - Poem by Kate Breeze

Dark, murky,
Shit infested
Mind boggling
Swamp Brain.

The bitter sweet smell of
Festering insanity.
Too polluted to
Take a dip.

Choppy upstream current.
Finally still.

There you are my reflection.
The creature of the black lagoon.


Comments about Self-Portrait by Kate Breeze

  • (4/12/2006 6:37:00 PM)

    I am wondering why your ratings are so low... they don't deserve to be at all. I love the way your mind works. I love your choice of words. You are an amazing writer who can capture a moment then permit others to experience it. Thank you for that.
    Jessica
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  • (2/24/2006 4:20:00 AM)

    Hi Kate,
    Short but you captured exactly what you were feeling. I found it a little sad, which means I really did enjoy it. Well done.
    Debs x
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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 24, 2006



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