Saturday, January 31, 2015

Selfish Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dried tears on my cheek
My eyelashes are damp
My heart is too weak
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Naomi Mith
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Khairul Ahsan 31 January 2015

This is your first poem that I have read on this site, and I must say I liked it a lot. Thanks for the 'Poets Notes'- I liked the frank confession. Although the title of the poem is apt and the lines of the poem suggest that the emotions emanate from some selfish activities of the poet in the past with regard to her lover, yet it appears to me that the one who could see her own mistakes that led her to this 'emotional mess', and write these beautiful lines to express her realization, couldn't be all too selfish in real life. However, you are the best judge of your actions, but as a poem, I can say that your expression is beautiful. Your biography is one of the shortest I've read so far, yet not the least said.

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