Sunday, September 30, 2007

Sell Before Next Tuesday-Pt. In A Series Of Poems Leading To My Death Comments

Rating: 4.9

You poor pitiful and apparently sick man
Bloated like an expired sales date on a roll of pork sausage
Logic would tell you that your time is drawing near
What with that oozing sore on the top of your head
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Ted Sheridan
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Dee Daffodil 10 October 2007

Yikes...and I thought the last one I wrote was a bit of a downer...: -) I'm hoping that this is only fictional and that there is nothing seriously wrong...: -) Man! ! ! You sure can write! ! Hugs, Dee

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x... x... 30 September 2007

Ted, you're scaring me now...if it's about the ip number 'theif\n' ph knows or has traced 'it', they say at least, they don't share nameonly say it's one that keeps changing email addresses as well as several identities, but suggest getting new firewall and software installed that will stop it....If not that, than I am really scared for you...written with a passion that hits me in the gut.....am already fragile as I already had to remove my words, AGAIN so they are not hacked more than they already were, I don't want you to be gone as well...Please say these poems are just stories...know one knows the day, exactly at least, when we'll leave, so, that makes this more worriesome [sp? ] I send you big hugs and beg you to hang in there...Don't let one sick person on here get you down, like it did me.....love, marci. big hugs to you.....

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fanniesson - 30 September 2007

The humor is here but not many are gonna see it till their turn. and they wanna to write something nice one

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Hubcap Shithead 30 September 2007

thought provoking hard hitting.. reality poetized..

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