Friday, February 16, 2007

Send Me A Note And Let Me Know You'Re Alright Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of late___
The sunshine has been in limited supply
seems the rain is mostly forecast
Even the Vodka has lost its appeal to me
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Ted Sheridan
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Dee Daffodil 16 February 2007

It's very hard when we lose touch with someone very close to us (possibly in tha same room even) ...I hope you find the key to open that door. Hugs, Dee

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Grace Tan 16 February 2007

Captivating! From the beginning, I have already been immersed in its beautiful title. I like the theme and how you started and ended the poem. It is filled with melancholy and dread, like how the sun gets dimmer everyday after her leaving, almost like your blood is slowly draining away from your heart. Beautiful.

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