Saturday, August 24, 2013

Senryu Once Again Comments

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Promises are high
Thick black clouds on the sky
Winds, sly!

It makes us
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 September 2013

use of pun and shadowy words used so beautifully/Ur silence unlocks, My questions unstated, Answers abound Unuttered uttered many thing nice to read thank

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Shahzia Batool 30 August 2013

for image and rhyming: Promises are high Thick black clouds on the sky Winds, sly! - - - - - - - - - - - - - for a specific feel: It makes us Jump, leap, up down Heart, with its own tact! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - for phrases: Ur silence unlocks My questions unstated Answers abound - - - - - - Beautiful! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 August 2013

Questions unstated Answers abound Now we seek questions that match answers. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 24 August 2013

Short and sweet, a great poem.

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