Thursday, November 1, 2018

Senryu: The Hair-Bun Comments

Rating: 5.0

A hair-bun is that-
flower vase, which alone can
grace many rooms.
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Pallab Chaudhury
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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2018

Excellent senryu......well thought.10+++

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 November 2018

Thank you so much for your comments. With best wishes. PC

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

It is a beautiful Senryu on beauty relating to hair bun having brief expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 November 2018

Thank you for your comments. With best wishes for the fore-coming Deepawali. PC

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T Rajan Evol 01 November 2018

Nice short poem. Hair bun in unique way. This must be a senryu not haiku,

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Pallab Chaudhury 02 November 2018

Welcome! To my e-page. Thank you for your observations being communicated. With regards PC

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