Senryu1 Poem by Negar Gorji

Senryu1

Rating: 4.5


Laughing out loud
Pinwheel whirls quickly
The little boy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 July 2017

We know it is the boy laughing, but the word order shows the pinwheel laughing - so you create a double image of delight - both the boy's and the machine's

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