Dream Sky Poem by Negar Gorji

Dream Sky

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I was dancing inside the wind
When i found a sky full of dream
A sky full of happiness and calm
Which could bring smile to my heart!
I heard a voice, close your eyes
Don't think about any thing, just lie down!
I wanted to lie on that white cloud
Which was full of deeply blue calm!
But i fell down in a strong storm
Since it was just a vapor dense!
And the storm voice made me deaf
Which used to say; i lost the dream sky!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 26 December 2015

hen i found a sky full of dream A sky full of happiness and calm Which could bring smile to my heart! and i wanted to lie down on the white cloud. beautiful imagination and sentiments expressed. love ur emotions. tony

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The loss of the dream sky was inevitable. Again your imaginative splutter has worked out this poetic splendour of a season in your early years of writing poetry. Keep the spirits ups

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 09 February 2013

This sky can defeat the fowls of tyrant wings. this sky seems to be windward of light and dream. alighting the minds! simply, i like this brilliant work and it really knock my socks off. well done

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