Negar Gorji


Dream Sky - Poem by Negar Gorji

I was dancing inside the wind
When i found a sky full of dream
A sky full of happiness and calm
Which could bring smile to my heart!
I heard a voice, close your eyes
Don't think about any thing, just lie down!
I wanted to lie on that white cloud
Which was full of deeply blue calm!
But i fell down in a strong storm
Since it was just a vapor dense!
And the storm voice made me deaf
Which used to say; i lost the dream sky!


Comments about Dream Sky by Negar Gorji

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/26/2015 6:28:00 AM)


    hen i found a sky full of dream
    A sky full of happiness and calm
    Which could bring smile to my heart!

    and i wanted to lie down on the white cloud. beautiful imagination and sentiments expressed. love ur emotions. tony
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  • (2/26/2013 5:42:00 PM)


    The loss of the dream sky was inevitable. Again your imaginative splutter has worked out this poetic splendour of a season in your early years of writing poetry. Keep the spirits ups (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (2/9/2013 11:54:00 PM)


    This sky can defeat the fowls of tyrant wings. this sky seems to be windward of light and dream. alighting the minds!
    simply, i like this brilliant work and it really knock my socks off.
    well done
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, January 14, 2013


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