Set You Feee Poem by Rachel Stargell

Set You Feee



I wake up every morning to you but day by day you change are mabey it is me knowing I'm not good enough for your love are that how you make me fell so alone like you dont even care the pain the hurt the sorrow full of lie and despair its like music to your ears how can you say you love me when you do everything differently yet I dont understand why you say she a friend I know in my heart she is your ex but a ex is a ex for a reason you not care for the tears I cry the pain I'm longing for your touch just one me time you to say it's ok I'm here but the star in your eye when we first me is slowly fading away I can se you no longer smile that smile to me I see you talk to your ex like it ok i lov you but my momma always told me of it not meant be set it free if it is then it come back but I can o lu do as you please so I'll set you free

Tuesday, October 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,change,depression,despair,friend,longing,music,pain,smile,sorrow,star,tears
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So I am in a relationship and last 3 months we been together was great till I put a picture of me and him up someone I didn't even know nor talked to said we have a certain relationship never did and he got upset and ever since then we argued and fussed he started talking to a ex after a year of being together and he took our relationship down and or profile pic down and his ex has been liking them he called her yesterday I tried to call him keep say8he in a call after 15 mins passed he finally answered but when I asked he said no he want never been on phone and sent him screenshots of ot then he tried to delete it and he know how I fell about p o r n and what happened for the reason I went watch it and I woke up to him watching it made me fell lowab8myself I always had self esteem issues since I was 5 I started cutting my self at age 5 till I was 19 delt with depression ADHD and bipolar and a few others I also am autistic can't tell unless u look and listen closely to me but I still fight my demons every day so if you think your to skinny your not just right I give anything to be skinny just for a few days not like I am now 205 pounds 4 kids I live them to death I'm 25 I dont care who you are your beautiful are handsome be you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krista Buchta 05 January 2020

You need to see that your not ready for the best chapter

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Krista Buchta 05 January 2020

Why is this a cry for help I can’t say you are bad not good but you need to grow as a writer make

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Krista Buchta 05 January 2020

Why are you only a one poem wonder

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Rachel 08 June 2021

Case that ehat i used to be i was a great writer

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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

Thank you for sharing this prose poem.

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