Tuesday, June 20, 2006

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A pure gold ornament weigh in carats.
But I am scared to wear as the phobia
which rings always specially in nights
whether they kill me or rob
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nimal dunuhinga
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Joe Breunig 23 June 2006

A nice write; this poem underscores the notion, 'Do you own your possesions or do they own you? '.

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Sandra Fowler 20 June 2006

Praise for your golden poem.As the song writer says, 'The best things in life are free'.. Sandra

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Emma Johnson 20 June 2006

Absolutely beautiful. Susie.

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Joseph Daly 20 June 2006

As ever, a beautiful use of language Nimal.

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