Monday, August 24, 2009

~shadowed Sanctity~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I sit here in shadowed silver
the ghost's of many ancients call me
echoes of yesterday whilst in the dawn of today
can they know my heart
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angel Elmoghazy
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Angel, a good work! ! ! I smell an archaic dust in your writing... the olden times belong your poetry.... a special style... I liked it fear not the walk of the immortals--> my best line

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Jen Capaldi 24 August 2009

you poem is beautiful and haunting. i love thent you chose your words the way you do. i love rennesaince poetry and your reflects that you read it too. i look forward to reading more of your work. kudos! Jen Capaldi

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