Saturday, July 2, 2016

Shadows In The Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was something about that place
The way I felt as I watched those ocean tides
I lost myself inside the waves
Shadows from the water escaped into me
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G J Salgado
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Tom Billsborough 04 July 2016

Just Reviewed one of your poems on Be your own Editor. Liked what I read. Thought I'd have a further peak. I can empathize with this poem. The sea has a similar effect though, as a man, I see it as my Goddess. Tes, this is a very good poem. Tom Billsborough

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