Shapeless Poem by i am not crazy

Shapeless

Rating: 5.0


My heart is like glass when it shattered today
And my lips sealed tight for there’s nothing more I could say
Flown into rivers, driven to flood
The tears I’ve cried is already my blood
My smiles all gone and had dried out too
All this happening ‘coz of this love for you
It turned me crazy and all I’ll ever see
After all of my love this how you’ll treat me
The flowers die as they feel my anger
And the hour stopped ticking when you made me cry louder
The day so light came out so dark and grim
It was struggle, but I’d say, heaven it seemed
For what I’m feeling now, this narrowed time
I can’t think straight because my emotions: prime
Love stood by me yet left me still broken
Thinking none of these could happen
I will remain silent forever and through
Not unless you’d love me back too
And only then I would say
My heart is something unbreakable today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 27 December 2008

My tears are my blood....very vivid imagination....well express agony.

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Agnes Török 06 May 2007

Wow, this is incredibly beautiful. I mean to write like that! Wonderful, really. I know how it feels though, I write an entire notebook full of poems last time it happened to me. Non of them where as good as yours, though. But keep up the good work: D

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