Sharing Space With Ghost Poem by Sando Hussam

Sharing Space With Ghost

Rating: 5.0


There once was a ghost who wanted to share
his hauntingly beautiful home with care
but no one could bear
to stay there more than a DARE
he tried to be friendly and kind
but alas, people were blind
to the beauty they could find
In the ghost's peaceful state of mind

So the ghost decided to stay
and haunt the house every day
In the hopes that someday
someone would come and play
and finally, the time had come
A trio of travelers, full of fun
moved in and the ghost was stunned
they loved his home and never shunned

Together they shared the ghost's space
creating a warm and welcoming place
and with a smile on his ghostly face
the ghost finally found his happy place.

Monday, June 12, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 16 June 2023

I liked the story, I liked the rhyming, and I liked the flow from line to line, stanza to stanza. It reminds me of Casper the Friendly Ghost, fhe cartoon character from MANY years ago. ;)

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2023

Finding one's 'happy place' is to be cherished, as MANY never come close, probably, to finding theirs. I don't think of myself in terms of 'happy/happiness', but I strive for contentment. bri : )

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