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And most important comment mine side: Most beautifully described with great tenderness.
The SHE you wish to be old with till death does you part.... Tremendously pictured in the clearest way in brevity. Absolute a brilliant registration, a loveliest poem. A TEN and much much more!
....Even with wrinkles she will be Still beautiful...appreciated the beauty of expression! Thanks for sharing this beautiful senryu with us..10