Sunday, November 11, 2007

She Caws For Help But Her Only Friends Have All Flown Comments

Rating: 5.0

This woman has only Ravens for friends
She talks to them through the foggy wired windows of her room in the morgue
They gaggle back like gossiping black geese in the surrounding trees
As she reads aloud for them from the tear stained pages of her “autobioautopsy”
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Ted Sheridan
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Ivan Donn Carswell 11 November 2007

Despite its cacophany of raucously brilliant neologistical Sheridanisms, this is still a sensitve piece of writing: 'So at least she comes by everything she owns honestly...' Truth rings through... Rgds, Ivan

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Francesca Johnson 11 November 2007

This is classic Ted Sheridan stuff - pithy, intelligent, vitriolically biting, dark and delicious. Like a cup of arsenic-laced hot chocolate.......I love it! ! Top marks, Ted. Love, Fran xxx

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Allan James Saywell 11 November 2007

Ted could i send this poem to my three ex-wives to be read at my funeral even if they did not attend it would surely seep back to them via the grape vine it has a lot of natural venom AWSOME

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