She Ditched Me Poem by Dipy Hermonite

She Ditched Me

Rating: 3.3


For the first time in my life
I fell in love with a girl
She said she’d always be by my side
Whenever I needed her
Oh she was sooo…., so sweet
Like a cool spring on a hot summer’s day
But like the hundreds of fools she must have fooled
My heart’s broken till this day

Coz she ditched me
Yeah folks that’s right
She left me in the middle of nowhere
And only half as bright
Oh mama she ditched me
Yeah mama that’s right
Once again I’m a loner
With hardly any more will to fight

I started avoiding people
I’d always keep away
I’d just sit there in the corner
And dream every day
My friends thought I was crazy
They started avoiding me
But they didn’t know anything, you see

She said she’d always love me
Be it morning, noon or night
She’d stand by my side through thick and thin
Even when things weren’t so right
Each day used to be so heavenly
Each night was full of song
But seriousness was not a part of me
And I guess that’s where I went wrong
So she ditched me …..! ! !

One day she said “My darling though I love you
I’ve got to think about my future as well
I know you can never be serious about your life
But why do you want to spoil mine as well”

Oh my darling, my sweetheart, why didn’t you trust me
I’d have made my future – for you
I’d have sweated and slogged throughout the years
To see that you were happy too

But now life means nothing to me
I don’t care about rights or wrongs
I’ve left my future to destiny
Though my friends say it’s foolish and wrong

You know why?
Coz she ditched me ….! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nah! ! Don't take this as an autobiography of the poet!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajit Chaliha 20 November 2013

Love is music, created by lovers with various instruments. When you do not tune these instruments frequently, the music turn to just noise. Try bringing back to tune the instruments of love.

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Soumita Sarkar 04 October 2013

one person can never decide upon anybody's life.....good write...this should be a past dream.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

love has its weakness same as strength. a strong love will survive a weak one will not. best to find out up front a good write

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Patricia Grantham 23 August 2013

To love and lost is better not to be loved at all. A potent write that we all can relate to at one time or another. We can get up shake off the dust and keep moving. Love will come again whenever and wherever. Please read my poem Love Seesaw. Enjoyed this write.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2013

good write, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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