You Set Me On Fire Poem by Dipy Hermonite

You Set Me On Fire

Rating: 4.7


Baby whenever you come before me
You really set me on fire
My breathing becomes ten times faster
And my fever goes higher and higher
I wanna say something nice to you
But my words keep failing too
So tell me my honey what I should do

The first time I saw you baby
I knew you were the one for me
You were brought into my life
By a streak of destiny
I want to take you out to the movies
And tell you how I feel
Come to Yankee Doodle with me baby
Don't worry about the bill

Even if you looked into my heart and see
You'd find it bubbling with desire
I'd like to take you out on my mobike babe
And risk getting a flat tyre
Athough the fuel prices have gone up baby
It really shouldn't bother you
You'd rather say ha ha ha and hoo hoo hoo

When the sky is grey with clouds
And the thunder, when it growls out loud
And when the wind whispers through the leaves on the trees
The rain pours down in torrents and my blood begins to freeze
Thats the time, I wanna be near you
Having coffee and with no worries too
But then, I know
Its just a crazy dream of mine and it'll go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Blake 21 June 2007

wonderful writing, great job

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Janelle Morehart 26 June 2007

You should be a song writer lol. This is a wonderful peice. Your a very sweet person <3

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 August 2007

The girl of your dreams dipy and your on about fuel prices, hardly the most romantic move...

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Marvin Brato 04 July 2007

Many times I have had felt this thing, whenever I meet a lady who sets me on fire! Thanks for sharing. Good write Dipy. worth the 9.

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Jessica Rose 29 June 2007

wow you say so much in the poem with the simpliest of words, it really shows what a great skill for poetry you have. Great work! !

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Love it! that is what a guy feels when u see what u think ur dream girl? good poem Dipy! Sun

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~crazy/beautiful~ 27 June 2007

I HOPE THE PERSON U WERE TALKING ABOUT HAS SEEN THIS.SHE WOULD FREAK! NOT MANY GURLS HAVE THE LUXURY OF HAVING POEMS WRITTEN ABOUT THEM! KEEP WRITING!

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