She Remembers Him Poem by Glenn Bagshaw

She Remembers Him

Rating: 5.0


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Drifting, shifting,
silting snowflakes,
moths upon the window sill
and his brief days of these war years
insect flutter, fallen, flutter,
draped upon his final ground.

Yearning, turning
trailing, failing,
the war's now globed,
an old porch light.
Then touch of striving,
(a trail that whispers!)
skims her face
one moth-strewn night.





Drifting, drifting,
dancing snowflakes,
moths upon the window sill
and his brief days of these war years
insect flutter, fallen, flutter,
draped upon his final ground.

Yearning, turning
trailing, failing,
the war's now globed,
an old porch light.
Then touch of striving,
(a trail that whispers!)
whisks her face
one moth-strewn night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amberlee Carter 29 October 2005

you've capture the moment so well, I'm still lost in the translation...excellent writing my friend.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 27 October 2005

Brilliant poem Glenn. It's amazing how you've captured this moment that many others would miss. Lovely sentiment too.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 October 2005

dear glenn lovely,

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