Bilal Raja

Rookie (28/04/89 / Leicester)

She’s A Tear That Hangs Inside My Soul Forever - Poem by Bilal Raja

I watch them inhume thee
A prayer’s cried
The guilt consumes me
Eats away inside

I see your smiling face
Everywhere I go
Full of style and grace
I should’ve let you know

My affection untold
The biggest regret
Your heart in my soul
I can never forget

Every hurtful word I said
Is ringing in my ears
Demons in my head
Feeding on my fears

I’ll drink away the pain
I’ll drown my sorrow
I’ll do it all over again
There’ll be no tomorrow

God has had his way
The day has come
I’ll never get to say
“I love you, Mum”


Comments about She’s A Tear That Hangs Inside My Soul Forever by Bilal Raja

  • Dylan Oppedahl (7/12/2009 11:39:00 AM)

    That was amazing. I didn't expect the ending (Report)Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (7/10/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    ''God has had his way
    The day has come
    I’ll never get to say
    “I love you, Mum” ''
    God the creator, created all things there are in the Universe.God the creator and the devil has a relationship with each other.And a mother is the most important person between them.Well written poem..10
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  • Dolan Doran (2/13/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    holy **** that is amazing! ! ! it's more then a 'wow' and deserves 4 stars! ! great job! (Report)Reply

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (2/10/2009 11:30:00 PM)

    This poem made me gasp when it ended. You have captured grief in such a creative way. Just say how much you love her when you close your eyes every night before you go to sleep. She will hear you I know. A bitter sweet poem straight from your heart. Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • Jim Norausky (2/8/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    Very beautiful poem and title, sadly expressed. Bring joy to your heart with spiritual thoughts of her. Jim (Report)Reply

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  • Shari . (2/8/2009 8:59:00 PM)

    so very sad. very nice work though. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009



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