Bilal Raja

Rookie (28/04/89 / Leicester)

Acronym For Your Name - Poem by Bilal Raja

Bewildered In Life And Love,
Something’s will never change
My sad and lonely existence
It’s bound to remain the same

Believing In Lie After Lie,
You led me further astray
Our relationship could never grow
When you were always away

Because I’ve Loved And Lost,
By the saying I’m appalled
That, its better to have loved and lost
Then to have never loved at all

Broken Innocence Left A Legacy,
Turning a child into a ghost
Life through my blood shot eyes
Now to that lets all toast

Being Isolated Leaves Anyone Lonely,
Without a lover or a friend
Alone in this dark room
This is where my story ends


Comments about Acronym For Your Name by Bilal Raja

  • Rani Turton (2/16/2009 3:56:00 PM)

    Very touching, Bilal. A promise of great poetry to come. (Report)Reply

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  • Dolan Doran (2/14/2009 3:43:00 PM)

    holy crap! ! I love it! ! ! seriously seriously love it! great job. (Report)Reply

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  • Tiera Parker (1/30/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    that poem was great.. i almost cried.. i know exactly how it feels (Report)Reply

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  • Raindreamer Hippy (1/23/2009 5:00:00 PM)

    You express yourself well. I feel like so many people could relate to this. Another great poem. =) (Report)Reply

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  • C Richard Miles (1/22/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    Bilal, I’m Leaving A Letter
    Or two about your poem:
    Believe that it’s sure to get better
    And sorrows will soon be going.

    A bit trite, perhaps, but experience is talking here. At your age life can seem not worth living sometimes, but at least you’ve got it all before you. A great poem, though – keep on writing.

    Richard
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  • Glenn Mark AmorGlenn Mark Amor (1/22/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    emotional poem.. i like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Ron Knight (1/21/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    Great poem excellent discription keep up the good work (Report)Reply

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  • Sarah AbdullahSarah Abdullah (1/21/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    Broken Innocence Left A Legacy,
    Turning a child into a ghost
    Life through my blood shot eyes
    Now to that lets all toast

    My Favorite part.....
    Nice Lines....
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  • Jessica Goudreault (1/17/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    Aww, that was well written. My favorite part was the 'It's better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all'. (Report)Reply

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  • Brianna Trombley (1/17/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    i like the way you express yourself, another great write (Report)Reply

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  • Ana Zaldivar (1/17/2009 8:07:00 PM)

    great job :) you are trully talented! it's a very beautiful poem! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Dolan Doran (1/17/2009 8:04:00 PM)

    okey, this one I love....it's great. I don't really like rhyme schemes, but appart from that, I love it. I'm putting this one on my wall. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/17/2009 6:17:00 PM)

    gr8t job again. one lil thing.. i noticed it in my own work, sometime following the 'rule', rhyming patterns etc, take away froom emotion and replaces the stronger feeling with the rhyme, dont let that stop you from reachign the peaks of expression.

    Leslie
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  • Kyle Orr (1/17/2009 3:12:00 PM)

    i love it all :) you are very good at what you do please keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (1/17/2009 11:50:00 AM)

    Solitude can give you introspective thoughts.A good way to get rid of loneliness is to trust your inner-guide-your Angel.You can't always depend on people but you can depend on your inner strength.I personally don't mind my own company.At least I can think then with no demands from other people.Good poem capturing the pain of loneliness....but we never walk alone...never...as long as you believe in yourself.Smile--I gave you another ten. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 15, 2009



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