Tuesday, February 17, 2015

'She Took My Heart - Still In Search Of Her' Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once came a girl, like a butterfly.
Neither she knew me,   nor did I.
But what had happened
Is fault of her eye...! !
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Sahil Bangotra
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Atria 03 April 2021

Awesome

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Naila Rais 05 December 2018

Oh....... Amazing dream.. ...10 You may like to read my poems too.. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

such a beauty young poet you know it at the end you gave it a turn after a kiss into a dream she will scream and come again it happens to all young ones in a similar vein @77 I still young remain will she not come again I ask myself WHY NOT MAN..she will and must kiss comes as a trust

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Aditya Gupta 08 March 2015

nice work, sahil, didnot know you did english poetry. this is a pleasant surprise.. keep up the good work

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2015

A lovely train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a beautiful love poem. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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