She Will Not Poem by Akhtar Jawad

She Will Not

Rating: 5.0


She started writing poems,
I read her poems,
I know only one thing about her,
She is just seventeen.
And a college student.
Probably she has none,
Who can listen to the voice,
Of her broken heart.
Being deceived in love,
The strains of her feelings,
Burst out like streams,
In pretty nice poems.
Like the violent waves,
Of a hot stream,
I see tear in her eyes,
I feel pain of her heart.
Like the dry petals of a rose,
Faded in sun shine,
Too early,
And premature,
And couldn't survive,
Till the full moon light!
When wisdom of sky,
Is scattered in the night.
The petals about whom,
Shelley wrote are heaped,
For the lovely bed,
Of his beloved who has gone.
And memories of beloved,
On the bed of emotions,
It is love itself,
That slumbers on.

The sweet little girl,
At this stage of age,
Can't realize,
It's at all not love.
Just an attraction,
That will not lost long,
I advised her and wrote,
To forget the play boy.
Concentrate on studies,
And should keep writing,
Her lovely poems,
On her friends and games.

Oh God! Why did you give us a heart!
Oh Nature! Why do you call!
I know it well,
She will not! Not at all!

Sunday, August 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: deception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Having read a few poems by a broken heart.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2014

A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love.

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Khalid Saifullah 20 October 2017

A poem of thoughts....................................................................................

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Salini Nair 01 September 2014

very meaningful, and its an advise that colors of love will change with time......nice

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

Having passed through such stages, Akhtarji, you know the intensity of her feelings and you have applied balm in her wounded heart ! Let us hope that she will soon recover! ........ Akhtarji.... you are sizzling with poetry these days! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 31 August 2014

It is painful to get hurt at the age of seventeen.But, it happens.A nice poem and a lovely response to a poet's pain.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2014

A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love.

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