Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 95,165 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

I Am In Love - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I am often so attracted,
Mesmerized and enchanted,
Having watched pretty things,
With magic in their wings,
Flying at human height,
Touching eyes like a light,
Getting inside very deep,
With a pleasant soul peep,
Then my eyes smile,
Making heart juvenile,
And I say to myself,
Put book in the shelf,
Watch beauty an' sacrifice,
Your self, may be nice,
I then sing like a dove,
I am now in love.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Love starts with attraction and its climax is self sacrifice.

Comments about I Am In Love by Akhtar Jawad

  • Bharati Nayak (5/17/2017 7:21:00 PM)


    Then my eyes smile,
    Making heart juvenile,
    And I say to myself,
    Put book in the shelf,
    Watch beauty an' sacrifice,
    Your self, may be nice,
    I then sing like a dove,
    I am now in love.
    - - - - - - - - -Love does its magic and the heart melts losing itself to love- - - - -

    When heart falls in love, it very often loses its rationality- - - Our acquired knowledge through books can not explain why of this 'LOVE'- - -Why I get attracted, What is special that makes me love, is it right or wrong- - - - -Heart is swept away and sings like a dove- - -A great poem ! ! !
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  • Muzahidul Reza (4/25/2017 3:06:00 AM)


    Then my eyes smile,
    Making heart juvenile, yes it is a great written poem, philosophical in tone. Love, in the modern world is very rare but we need love everywhere to develop human society; thank you for sharing the poem with us,10
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  • (3/2/2017 8:21:00 PM)


    So beautifully expressed in lovely words. Take care and have a blessed day. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (1/13/2017 7:55:00 PM)


    Creating poems with good rhyme scheme is not an easy tasks, but to you it appears to be a piece of cake. My respects Jawal. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (1/2/2017 9:55:00 PM)

    Love
    Dear poet the essence of love is captured perfectly in your poem.+++10

    Robert
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  • (10/18/2016 5:51:00 PM)


    such a great writer here yet a five pointer o dear
    why i wonder

    kabhee kabhee
    hum bhee soachtey hain
    humaree nagamein
    kyu koie padta naheen

    urdu hamey aatee nahee
    English aap koe naheen
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  • (10/18/2016 5:49:00 PM)

    sometimes
    why i wonder

    kabhee kabhee
    hum bhee soachtey hain
    humaree nagamein
    kyu koie padta naheen

    urdu hamey aatee nahee

    English aap koe naheen
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  • Rajnish Manga (9/29/2016 6:31:00 AM)

    I Am In Love
    How much fancy and how much reality. But, then, most of the affairs start like that. In love one has to renounce his self. Lovely poem.
    Watch beauty an' sacrifice,
    Your self,
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  • (8/3/2016 12:13:00 PM)


    husn khuda deta hai
    shourat hum aaaaam log
    and u deserve it
    AJ
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  • Raj Arumugam (7/28/2016 1:27:00 AM)


    An inspiring poem on the value of beauty, Akhtar...It's beautifully written and has great depth (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Sinicrope (5/10/2016 2:53:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem about being in love. Pretty things with magic in their wings highlights the light effervescent quality of your writing and the elation of being in love. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Sahra Hussein (5/7/2016 12:40:00 PM)


    I liked the poem started because at the end it is different.
    I liked the line says Then my eyes smile
    the title and the way the poem express being in love was amazing
    because I was expecting that you will talk about love right a way but you weren't
    you said your last line that you are in love.
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  • (4/4/2016 8:07:00 AM)


    A sensitive and pure heart is always open to love with out worrying about consequences. That is what your heart is Akhtarji. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/6/2016 12:23:00 PM)


    Lovely lines about love! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (12/28/2015 7:19:00 AM)


    Love is beautiful and to rejoice is bliss. Innocent and pure emotions. Compliments from bottom of my heart. (Report) Reply

  • The Princess (12/24/2015 4:54:00 PM)


    Beautifully expressed by a man in love! Feeling juvenile with the beauty and the smile! Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (12/17/2015 10:22:00 PM)


    i think those pretty things are drones of a foreign government, or sent by your wife! and the lights in your eyes are laser beams peeping into your brain to pick it clean. (i mean obtain all of your knowledge, oh wise one!)

    be careful (of) what you fall in love with!

    nice! bri : ) great rhyming! to MyPoemList.

    do you care to have it in December's showcase? it would fit nicely into Section B.
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/24/2015 7:45:00 AM)


    I then sing like a dove,
    I am now in love. so my dear poet your dove of your heart can sing. What a magic my dear Akhtar Jawad thank you very much. your tony
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  • The Princess (11/8/2015 8:22:00 AM)


    I nice depiction love.....beautiful dove the dove! (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2015 8:45:00 PM)


    Beautifully expressed, nicely composed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 25, 2014


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