I Am In Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Am In Love

Rating: 4.7


I am often so attracted,
Mesmerized and enchanted,
Having watched pretty things,
With magic in their wings,
Flying at human height,
Touching eyes like a light,
Getting inside very deep,
With a pleasant soul peep,
Then my eyes smile,
Making heart juvenile,
And I say to myself,
Put book in the shelf,
Watch beauty an' sacrifice,
Your self, may be nice,
I then sing like a dove,
I am now in love.

Sunday, April 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love starts with attraction and its climax is self sacrifice.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Carter 31 December 2017

I know what you mean. I feel the same way a lot of times.

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Seema Chowdhury 02 March 2017

So beautifully expressed in lovely words. Take care and have a blessed day.

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Bharati Nayak 17 May 2017

Then my eyes smile, Making heart juvenile, And I say to myself, Put book in the shelf, Watch beauty an' sacrifice, Your self, may be nice, I then sing like a dove, I am now in love. - - - - - - - - -Love does its magic and the heart melts losing itself to love- - - - - When heart falls in love, it very often loses its rationality- - - Our acquired knowledge through books can not explain why of this 'LOVE'- - -Why I get attracted, What is special that makes me love, is it right or wrong- - - - -Heart is swept away and sings like a dove- - -A great poem ! ! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 January 2018

Wow Sir, what a meaningful delight you can put through your words into the heart of any reader, any age, any land! Put book in the shelf- a tiny yet most powerful line that fills the soul with immense pleasure.Falling in love is a natural phenomenon, but the very feeling and the thrilling discovery of being in love is a celestial experience. You are a gifted poet with magnetic personna- that reflects through each of your words. Thanks for the sharing.10++++ Subhas

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Loaded with a love that is lovely and leaps beyond limits. Excellently expressed my friend!

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Jonathan Grover 15 July 2021

A great love poem! This poem is the most powerful essence of your poetic soul... lovely expression!

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Sir your have penned it so very beautifully.

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bri edwards 23 December 2020

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

The metamorphosis of love is beautifully paited

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Mark Heathcote 28 May 2020

A beautiful poem that takes its inspiration from the splendour and wonder of all we find around ourselves.

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