Thursday, June 4, 2009

Shores Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love to hear the ocean's wave
It is a sound I often crave
The cry of a lonely seagull above the shore
It is a sound I need even more
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Deborah Cromer
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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

Last tiem when I read it, i saw a different picture, this time I see a greater message..I see life in shells, just like human beings that are within reach and can be held and embraced.........then the shells kissed by the oceans' waves, travelling places with the tidal waves, just as the human beings....carried away to different destinies........... wow is the word for the poem...............and wwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww is the word for the poet....

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Michael Moorcroft 18 August 2009

I really like this one and I love the mystery at the end of the poem.10+

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Deborah Cromer

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