Shot You Down Poem by Rachel Brewer

Shot You Down



I saw you leave your body,
The moment they shot you down.

I saw you float to heaven,
And I knew you would be safe.

I felt your spirit leave me,
And knew you were on your way.

On your way up to heaven,
To be with the angels.

They would take care of you,
I knew that for sure.

The moment I felt you leave,
I almost died inside.

But I know it’ll be alright,
Because you are in a good place.

A good place,
Where you can watch over me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
saltedpeanut blank 05 September 2009

Wow that last stanza, I was waiting for it, gave me goosebumps. Good write.

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