Death...
Such a simple thing it seems.
Yet, it's the thing people fear the most.
Everyday I think about it.
Should I wait?
What do I have to lose?
No friends.
No relationships.
No love.
So I say again...
Should I wait?
You know, death isn't so bad.
When you think about it.
People die everyday,
Young and old.
Sometimes I don't understand why people die.
But for me...
I think I'm ready.
No more waiting.
Such a sad poem. But well written. I look forward to you directing the talent, that you so obviously have, to happier subjects.
Sometimes when we fall into such a deep state, we don't realize all the things we would be giving up; when we think we are ready to end things.. The world offers SOO much, and sometimes we don't realize just how much we would hurt others, if our presence was no longer on the earth. I bet you have a lot to offer, dont let the world dull you of your shine. This poem is very good, with a hidden depth.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow :) Death, considered as a depresng topic by many but i loved the poem :) mainly cause i have xactly the same views.. N i loved the way u put all these thoughts in such a composed and lovely way. Very well written. Keep it up. :)