Should Not Guide Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Should Not Guide

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Call it simple luck
But never get struck
Hard work is only alternative
Only person has to decide and be selective

Never blame failure
Any thing can happen in future
Turn the pages
And successfully mange

We know two things for sure
So outcome is not doubtful to be assured
When we know death is reality
Then what can be future guarantee?

Fate may play its role
It may visit any time with call
It is not unusual
So prepare to look at it as casual

Fate should not guide our destiny
It is sickness of mind and inferiority
Go for extra effort and try for another route
It shall certainly bear the fruit

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 January 2014

interesting Quiet OutsiderLess than a minute ago i like the concept but the flow seemed a bit choppy Comment +1 ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 January 2014

could maybe flow better Dean Berger1 minute ago ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 January 2014

Call it simple luck But never get struck

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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