Show Exit Door Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Show Exit Door

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If people are forgotten in democracy
Whom do we approach for remedy?
The answer lies within conscious
The saying has become all the more famous

The country has witnessed shameful show
Where all parliamentary norms are allowed to forgo
The members have acted ruffians
Unruly and uncontrollable in disguise of respected civilians

Majority has suppressed rights of minority
All economic gains have been shared by mighty
The popular will is likely to rise against
But this criminality is committed on whose interest!

Small states should come in force
Let people follow strict rules themselves
The national wealth is major concern
Let each state have its portion in turn

The parliament is for conducting affairs
Not for blocking bills in unfair way
Let them attend fully, debate and offer dissent
It is foolish to create unruly scene or remain absent

Parliamentary democracy can not be imposed
Yet the people have enough of trust to be reposed
Let people’s representative realize the importance
We have gained freedom after sacrifices and not by chance

Let freedom and liberty rule the scene
Let country witness and shine
The real roots lie in people’s choice
Country may look forward with lots of promises

Today poor are pushed aside and forgotten
The country faces chaos and misrule even
People have good sense to reject the system
Even with enough of power to show them exit door

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

So true the poor are puched aside, (money shouldn't label who we are, but what's inside counts) Stacy Dran1 hour ago Good job, keep up the good work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

eloquent stacy owens1 hour ago sadly, history proves nothing will change save worsen Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

good points Derrick Hi'nes1 hour ago It becomes a bit preachy and opinionated for my taste Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago truth is hard to digest

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

If people are forgotten in democracy Whom do we approach for remedy?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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