Weldon Davis

Silver Star - 3,969 Points (8-16-80 / Fayetteville NC USA)

Shut Up - Poem by Weldon Davis

Each day beautiful insights
Come
Some subtle some in visions
Maybe I'll comprehend them
If-
I'll shut up and listen

If I'm silent
And they're silent
Then there is nothing really to say
In this world of broken relationships
Seems I always want my way

Nobody hurts like I hurt
Nobody needs companionship like I do
Silly to think that
Really I ought to
Just

Shut up and listen
Every once in a while
Then
I might actually
Learn something

Topic(s) of this poem: insight, love and friendship, relationships


Comments about Shut Up by Weldon Davis

  • (1/11/2016 11:11:00 PM)


    No. Weldom. Your 'Shut Up' to mention makes a difference to all.
    Your insights to remain beautiful with wishes to stay,
    Must be brought to the attention of others.
    Too many have been caught up with a doing to pay attention.
    But today your point of view has to be spoken 'and' mentioned,
    For others to stop, hear and listen. You have written a both subtle,
    Yet powerful poem. I love it. Thank you.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016



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