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Sign Of Conflict (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0
It's monsoon season!
Poor old Eucalyptus trees'
Branches on the ground.
Sign Of Conflict (Senryu)
Wednesday, August 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu,storm,tree,weather,wind
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COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 07 June 2019
superb poetic expression...............
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Chinedu Dike 12 November 2018
Well encapsulated with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Butch.
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2018
beautifull.. crying over the fallen branches of the tree.......... your mind is such a fine mind.. thank u dear poet. tony
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Susan Williams 22 August 2018
PART FIVE- -I am going to ask Daniel Brick to check this out if he will- -he is a highly educated poet on PH who writes the socks off the rest of us! Maybe he will tell me I don't have the real deal on this. But I think he will do it nicely- he's probably the best teacher there ever was!
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Susan Williams 22 August 2018
PART FOUR- -Maybe I am all wet. Let's hope. I think the possessive 's is always pronounced whether it is written s' or not but I am not a professor of grammar.
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Susan Williams 22 August 2018
PART THREE- - Dang I hate doing this because that image of torn arms is an absolute winner- -can you rework this piece to get the syllable count? ? ? This write is a beaut! ! !
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Susan Williams 22 August 2018
PART TWO- - Eucalyptus' is pronounced U- CA- LIP- SUS- SUS- - - - that awkward apostrophe still gives voice to the possessive SUS. Nit-picking but that is the struggle of writing these gorgeous poems. I give you a sweet 10 for that image but I think it is back to the drawing board for the Senryu designation.
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Susan Williams 22 August 2018
PART ONE- - -I really admire the image of that Eucalyptus' Torn arms On the ground. that gives this Senryu a huge amount of WoW factor... but since you've obviously got huge poetic skills I have to caution you on something that sneaks up on me and often robs me of a victory- -always say it out loud when counting syllables. - -
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