DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Signs Of Life And New..... - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

the ocean split open, like a
zipper being pulled down.
the sun hit the bottom of
this wonder, with hope of
a new begining and a
brand new sound...


Comments about Signs Of Life And New..... by DAVID GERARDINO

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/25/2006 6:08:00 AM)


    SO MUCH IMAGERY IN AFEW SHORT & WELL CPOPT LINES
    TAKES TALENT TO AMASS SUCH A WORK...NICE PENNING, DAVID!
    FRANK
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  • (1/21/2006 4:16:00 PM)


    It may well be a little out there David.I'm glad it is, otherwise I couldn't have seen it!
    Brilliant again David Thankyou
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  • (5/22/2005 10:51:00 PM)


    Word up Gerardino, baxter senses music. But edit the poem to correct the spelling of beginning.
    all the best
    erwin
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  • (5/22/2005 9:29:00 PM)


    ok, its a little out there, still i couldnt resist.............. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 22, 2005



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